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What to write here?

I have to agree with MaestroRage that this song, and all your songs so far lack transitions. Transitions make the song sound much more professional, without them it sounds sketchy and chaotic. This song btw has some interesting sounds, the instruments are quite unusual which adds a lot to originality. I like the way they are quiet yet technoey, creating a soft chillout feeling. I can hear you have potential but you do need practice. You could also try listening to ng songs from the genre which you want to make music in, to get some ideas or learn about the tricks of the trade. I also do that sometimes.

amilicious responds:

Again thank you for the advice, I'm really trying to make my music better, thanks for the positive review!

-Ami

loool

Nice and insane, but it really needs bass! This way it sounds unfinished. Plus it's just a little too fast imo.

It's me again

I forgot about this but now I remembered so here's a review for the full version.
You made this one much more interesting and variable than the previous one. What I don't like is the change of melody a bit after the cymbals, it sounds detuned in some places. But then those different synths come in and it rocks again. My biggest complaint would be though that there are still no drums:( Or you could have left it this way but excluded the cyms. Whateva. Perfect menu music again.

SolusLunes responds:

I REFUSE TER PUT IN DRUMS!

But the thing is, if you want to, I'd be glad to send you the .flp and whatnot.

Yeah, that little melody change was a mistake that managed to squeak in to the full version. Dunno how that happened, I thought I got rid of it.

No you don't suck at fl

I think it's pretty good actually. Interesting melody, nice choice of instruments, smooth structure. I didn't notice any flaws. The melody is kinda depressing... I like it though. That and the style and the mood remind me slightly of the fl demo song Tesseract, but this one's a lot better.
Chek out my stuff too if you get a chance.

Strange

Strange thing is that the same idea popped up in my head a few days ago... maybe I'll do it too... It's not bad so far, the drums are nice but imo you should really remove those strange whining/gliding synths (if I'm right that is Sytrus's 'Lame' preset, and it IS lame.) I'll definitely give a listen when you finish it.

O_O

Wow, weird n awesome... You should have put it into goth, the tremolo and organ-like synths make it really spooky. This would make a very good battle music in some horror game. Did you make all the vocals yourselves? If yes that makes my jaw drop... they are really really good. Fived!

*knocked out*

Like WOAOAOAOAOAAOOOW. This song is ultra awesome... it's kinda too long and repetitive but I don't really care... just two things, the vocal seems a bit out of sync and the snares should have been much louder. But even like that it ROXXXXX. Dld, fived.
Check out my stuff too if you got the time.

dj-Nate responds:

Fo sho.

What's with all the lawls n stuff?

You seem incapable of speaking english but you can make music... Reallly want a full version of this and part 1 too.

dj-Nate responds:

It's just joke submissions man, lol. I'm easily capable of speaking English, I just choose not to do so.

Weirdy weird

Weird title, weird song. Some nice effects there but it's kinda too random.

zcult responds:

Thanks man, I'll change it to keep it more of a consistent groove.

Too much snare

You used the snare roll way too many times and that's very annoying. Otherwise it's nice, though it could be a lot longer and the melody could be more variable. But I really like the general sound of it, it's soft and soothing.
Check ot my stuff too.

99% inactive composer wannabe. Only using this site as an archive now, more recent music can be found on Soundcloud.

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