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Pretty good

I really like the march effects at the beginning. When the drums come in I thought it was going to be a jumpstyle song but it turns rather into breakbeat. But it's also very nice this way. Only it should be a bit longer and it could have some more melody instruments.

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FoxDye responds:

Yes'ir... Your advice has now been taken. I've always wanted to make this particular song better, but needed more peoples opinions. So thanks for helping out there.

Grand

Awesome and epic song, just two problems: it should have some big banging drums, with lots of echo to increase the storm-feeling, instead of these. They r just too soft. The other thing, maybe it's just me but the volume somehow seems to vibrate, some sounds are sometimes quieter, sometimes louder, I don't like that, it sounds weird.
Btw those snare rolls are totally insane and some of the best I've ever heard.

madboss responds:

This song is a reaaaly old one - I've mad it with FL.. I think about 2 years or 3 ago. I wasn't the best in finding the appropriate volume levels and compressors to tge track. I think the badly choosen compressor is the fault of the volume levels vibration.

And I know that I've choosen the wrong drumbeats for this one - and the bass is too soft I think. But this song is past. Still thanks for your rev and your points and I'm glad you liked it!

Victory? Not completely

Lusta vagyok most kétszer leírni ugyanazt, úgyhogy át is váltok angolra:) It does not sound like a march. The beginning is really not victory-like, as the others said. I imagined an army, just defeated, they have been caught unprepared and suffered terrible losses. They are recooperating and mourning the fallen. This mood continues nearly all over the song, but when the drums come in at the end it sounds like they are taking a merciless but justified revenge, in honor of their fallen brothers. Only that's when it sounds like victory, and even then it's kinda bittersweet.
Now the technical opinion: I think you could have put in some slower quieter drums through the whole song and then switch into faster louder ones at the victory part. Other than that it's perfect. I really like it, though it's not really my kind of song, I prefer the march-sounding classical songs.

madboss responds:

Yeah I know. When I made that malody I thought - hm... it sounds like a hardly claimed victory so why not ginig this title to it? But yes, I had to realise after the first reviews that I had wrong. What you're saying with the drums is quite interesting - I'll try this in another song. I'm glad that you liked it! So thanks for your review and your points!

Hm

Nice calm AMBIENT piece. Coz this is not dnb. (Hey everyone, I'm not trying to be mean or smarty but Drum n Bass does not mean a song that consists mainly of drums and bass! Drum n Bass is usually a fast song with chaotic drums and a lot of bass and other stuff like melodies and lyrics.) Erm, back to this song. It's good for relaxing, but it's kinda repetitive, and you should add some more sounds. Maybe the bass could switch into a rough one after some time, too.

Nugz92 responds:

"(Hey everyone, I'm not trying to be mean or smarty but Drum n Bass does not mean a song that consists mainly of drums and bass! Drum n Bass is usually a fast song with chaotic drums and a lot of bass and other stuff like melodies and lyrics.)" That's good to know lol. it is repetitive and I meant it to be like that but PM me so i can add more things upon request for you. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

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Guess ok for a first song

I really like the instruments and the distortedness but the melody is far too simple and not too gothy. But not bad for a first attempt.

Holy krap

This song sux... NOT!!!!!!! Maaaaaaan its sooooooo awwweesssssooommmeee! Reminds me of your Late Night, except 1000 times better! Only one thing: you could have given it some harder kicks. Other than that it's flawless. Dl and a 5.

Ouch

Lol I just noticed this after reviewing the other one. I like the beat part, but the rest... g-sus

Like yeah

This does sound like the long lost (half)brother of Slam. At least the intro. But the main part... dunno. No so nice, not so brutal as it should be. Maybe a little cutting and twisting to the melody would make it better. And also the melody needs a louder, higher, more spectacular instrument. Hm, I think that's all.

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I like it

Really nice song, it sounds quite tiesto-like, except the drums. It deserves a gold so I gave it another download.

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