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Kool

I liked how it progressed from misc/ambient through techno into something drum n bass-like, almost unnoticably. I love the big drums in the first part, the bass of the techno part and the synths in the end. However the violin stuff doesn't fit in, it creates a dissonance with the rest. Plus it's too far up in 3d position and therefore sounds like not a part of the song.

DJ-Mann responds:

Okie doke, Thanx for the review^^

Egh...

If it had some big hard kick drums it could be considered a not too bad song, but this way I'm not sure it can be called a song. The single synth goes on waaaay too long alone without changing, and that ruins it completely. With a short intro and drums and some strange/spooky effects it could be an interesting song, I guess.

Good

I'll just list my thoughts in random order:
-You're about the second or third girl I see on the AP... that's kinda weird, why are there so few?
-This song is super hard. I absolutely love the percussions and the arps. Could use some compression though, the arps make my headphones explode when they're muffled.
-I've listened to some of your songs, not many, but I can give some general advice about them. First, I noticed that the transitions between parts of your songs are not really good. You could use some snare rolls or reverse cymbals, and short single crashes/booms as well. Plus your songs are a bit chaotic, try making them more evenly sorted. These things can make songs sound much more professional.

I think that's all. Check out my stuff if you'd like to.

TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

i like making my songs chaotic. oh, and i use GB3 (GarageBand 3) to make my music, so sorry if the bass hurts your headphones. peace!!

Not allowed

Dude I guess you haven't read the rules. It's not allowed to put up songs that are made from existing songs, like this one. Flagged. Sorry, I mean no offense, but this is illegal.

Meth09 responds:

Lol Actually It Says If Credit Is Not Givin So I Dont Think YOu Pay'd Attention 2 The Rules

Haha

Lol those little percussions really make it sound skeletony o.O It would fit well into some cartoony adventure game. I'm not sure it belongs in classical, but I definitely like it, very original.

ABITA responds:

Thank you.... This song was fun to make i enjoyed it. :)

Thumbz up

Umm I reviewed your newer song Caution303 earlier, so the comparison is kinda weird. The two songs are quite similar in general, but this one has a better melody, while the other has better instruments. In other words less pro, more catchy. One problem I'd note is that the kicks are not hard enough, the bass gets harder than the kicks, and that is quite weird in a trance song.

Infinnion responds:

yeah it's like softtrance or something,
but thnx 4 ya review :)

Great

I said I'd check out your songs in the reply a while ago, but I'm ultra lazy/forgetful:P Anyway I remembered to do it now.
You got some really nice instruments in this one. My only complaint would be that the melody should be a bit more variable, it's kinda boring this way. Sounds super-professional and the instruments make it very original.

Infinnion responds:

Thanx 4 ya review, I don't care it's late. Better one(or two) than none ;)

Woa

I really loved those crying synths in the beginning and end. However the ending is weird, and it kicks in kinda too suddenly after the intro synth. Nevertheless I can't give it lower than full 10s:)

g-r4ve responds:

=] lol

Awesomenessness

Though it's kinda short. Strange thing is I absolutely don't remember anything from the original song, except the melody and some of the lyrics. So I can't tell whether this is better than the original, but it rox anyway. What I don't like is the minor detunedness I can hear with the piano at the end.
Fiv'd!

Enough of reallies

Lol I just noticed that in my previous review I used "really" in every sentence. I gotta stop that lol. Now on to the review. I like those first arps, they create a feeling of danger. After that part somwhere the drums get a little misplaced, but it's nothing serious. The ending is a bit boring, you could have put in the melody of the arps with some different instrument. Overall it's an A-.

Review over, no reallies? No reallies. NOW I click submit^^.

99% inactive composer wannabe. Only using this site as an archive now, more recent music can be found on Soundcloud.

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Budapest, Hungary

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